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Friday, November 6, 2015
Turkey Point of View
It's close to Thanksgiving. We have a lot to be thankful for in our lives. Turkeys, on the other hand, do not. Point of view is looking at something from a particular viewpoint. We have talked about this in different ways in class. This time of year, many families have the tradition of going hunting for their Thanksgiving turkey. Today, I want you to write me a story. I don't want the story written from the perspective of the hunter, but rather the hunted. Write a fantastical story from the perspective of the turkey. Be creative and have fun. I can't wait to read them!
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I am a turkey and i am about to be hunted it is getting close to thanks giving and i mite be killed this year last year i got lucky
ReplyDelete(THE NEXT DAY) it is thanks giving and i am about to go out and answer this mating call i hear something oh no it is a hunter and he is about to shoot me RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!goble goble goble bam bam......bam i got to get out of here bam i am hit i mite be diner this year oh he is leaving
(THE NEXT DAY) i am alive but with a painful wound and i am getting old i mite next year be dinner i hope i die in peas not by being eaten i hope i see you next year if i am a live
THE END
BY HAYDEN STANFORD
Make sure you capitalize "i". Also, mite is spelled "might". Your story is cute.
DeleteMy child your imagination is fabulous and humorous. Keep up the good work I'm proud of you always.
DeleteMy child your imagination is humorous. Great job I am proud of you keep it going.
Deletethere is a day I fear. like a lot of us turkeys. Thanksgiving DOON DOON DOON!!! I see every year my friends giting eaten by ugly things .humans only if i had a gun so i can eat them and see if they like it. i dont thank they will.I dream of eating a human one day. BOOM sorry got to run!!!!!!!!!!! my new name is turkey soup. maybe they will make a song about me one day RUN RUN FAST AS U CAN CANT CATCH ME IM THE TURKEY!!! yea thats so smart y is that not a thing sorry i just got shout my the old mean hunter.R.I.P
ReplyDeleteSounds like Ginger Bread Man! Maybe they are related? :)
Deleteone day I was was walking through the woods just gobbling away then, I saw a hunter! he had not seen me yet I hid behind a bush and stayed a quiet as I could. then, he saw me and it happened. The hunter shot but he missed. I took off running into the woods he fallowed me. Finely I flew up in to the trees the hunter fallowed me. I watched the hunt look and look for me. The hunter saw me again and shot the hunter missed. I thought the hunter was crazy for missing twice. Then, I took off running into the woods and hid all day watching the hunter look for me but he never found me. Finley, he went away ,and I lived happily ever after.
ReplyDeleteTHE END
Luckily for the turkey, the hunter was a bad shot!
DeleteI heard a gun shot I am running from a hunter that is trying to kill me! Today is thanksgiving and i am not thankful for anything. Every single time it is thanksgiving people try to kill me they have killed my best friend Steve and i do not want to get killed today by a hunter. I heard they want to eat me for there supper and i am not letting them have me for supper! I hate when thanksgiving comes it is the wurst holiday ever! If i would see a hunter after me I would be scared It is scarier than Halloween! Then the next day I was still not killed but I was happy for now and forever until Turkey hunting season beings and next thanksgiving.
ReplyDeleteI really like your story. Don't forget to capitalize "i" when it's used in a sentence.
DeleteI saw the hunter looking at me and the hunter got his gun and i started running. He shot at me and he missed i tried to hide, he walked by me and i knocked the gun out of his hands.The hunter picked it up and, i started running he shot at me he missed again.He shot again and he hit my arm i was hurt he looked at me again he saw that i was hurt so he ran at me the hunter tripe so that gave me time to run.The hunter got up he shot at me again he hit my other arm.He tried to shot me he hit the tree beside me. When he shot at me he hit me in the leg they they had me for dinner.TO BE CONTINUED...... .
ReplyDeleteHow can it be continued. He was eaten, right?
DeleteOne day I was walking on the forest when I saw a hunter looking at me so I ran and ran an hid behind a tree. Then I thought he will be back for more. So I set up some traps. The man never came so I thought the coast is clear. The I walked up to a house with a farm then I saw the man with a gun come out of the house arguing about there being no Thanksgiving turkey yet. Then I thought of something so I grabbed a rooster and painted it just like me and pushed it inside the house. Problem solved then on Thanksgiving day I watched as my plan was working the wife sad this turkey tasty like a rooster and the man said but it is still good in fact its better then turkey. Maybe we should have this every thanksgiving.THE END
ReplyDeleteYou may have started a new tradition for them: rooster instead of turkey.
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ReplyDeleteThis is Minecraft story of a turkey.Hi, i'm turder(tur-der).Wait, what was that.I think that was a HUNTER!Run!(loud boom)"no!"He shot my wing!"HELP"!NO!NO!NOOOOOOOOOOO!"Don't do this to me"I have to,it's for my family.I do to and I have to feed them.Ok,i'll let you go.
ReplyDeleteTHE END
Turder the turkey? I don't think that sounds like any turkey I would like to eat!
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ReplyDeleteGobble,gobble hi,i'm Bob the turkey.It's almost Thanksgiving that's bad for me but,yesterday i saw a hunter the hunter looked me strait in the eye!He pointed his long gun at me!I ran as fast as i could!He missed the shot. I made it back home but,when i got home i heard a loud BANG!It scared me so bad it felt like he shot me!I am never going to go outside again in teal i'm hungry but,if you find me or any turkey let us eat in teal next year and if you don't i will peck you and my friends around the turkey world.Well this is the end bye,bye.Gobble,gobble.
ReplyDeleteOne morning i woke up it was thanksgiving. I heard a turkey calling HELP HELP. I did not go and look because i new what would happen. But i was very curious so i went after a but i heard it again but i all sunned i heard some one loading their shotgun and i ran away and all of those turkey out there this is how you survive thanksgiving !
ReplyDeleteCOOL JOHN
DeleteI am going to right about a turkeys point of view. This year,I am going to eat some berries.I left home to gather berries,nuts,grass and other things. And I saw a hunter. And I ask my self,"what is he doing." I saw a gun in his hand Then,he pointed the gun at me as I was gathering. After that, he shot at me. And I said,"gobble gobble gobble." Then,ran to the village and alerted all the people. But they did not believe me because they said,"I am scared of every thing." So the hunter found our village. And tried to shot use. They believed me they saw the hunter their selves. So every one took off running. He tried to take one of my little ones. So I pecked his hand. So for Thanksgiving HE DID NOT GET A TURKEY.
ReplyDeleteWe dont want to be eata so dont eat us were just turkeys we may be good but we can be nasty to like have meat on us or mud and our brains look nasty there all gewy and nasty it looks like clay we are all goey its weard so i woudnt eat us
ReplyDeleteI was in the woods and eating some breakfast. and i suddenly herd a gun shot and I ran as fast as I could then I found a big hallow log so i raced to it .And that man in green was following me still so i thought were could i go that he wood never think.I thought in a deer stand so i was looking for one and looking then a found one so i hopped in it and there was popcorn heat and lots of things there even was a window that was in front of me and the deer stand was camo and i found a chair so i got in the chair and eat some popcorn and soda and that was the best thanksgiving.last year my friend Bob got killed and i never seen him again.but this made up for it.
ReplyDeleteWe dont want to be eata so dont eat us were just turkeys we may be good but we can be nasty to like have meat on us or mud and our brains look nasty there all gewy and nasty it looks like clay we are all goey its weard so i woudnt eat us
ReplyDeleteThis is one, long sentence. You know you have to have to use end marks to show the end of a sentence.
DeleteI was in the woods and eating some breakfast. and i suddenly herd a gun shot and I ran as fast as I could then I found a big hallow log so i raced to it .And that man in green was following me still so i thought were could i go that he wood never think.I thought in a deer stand so i was looking for one and looking then a found one so i hopped in it and there was popcorn heat and lots of things there even was a window that was in front of me and the deer stand was camo and i found a chair so i got in the chair and eat some popcorn and soda and that was the best thanksgiving.last year my friend Bob got killed and i never seen him again.but this made up for it.
ReplyDeleteHi i'm a turkey i'm being hunted by the hunter looked down at me . I said to myself WHAT do i do! He and his son fired gun at me. Yet again shot the gun. At the end of the trail I was trapped and they shot. I WAS NOT ALIVE NO MORE !!!!
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Sparkles! I know that is a weird name for a turkey but just deal with it. Now, let me tell you a story how I almost died. I woke up one day and went to go hunting alone. My mom, dad, and brother did not know that i left. It was thanksgiving day and for turkeys it is dangerous for us to go out. I found my prey and right when I was about to grab it I herd a gun shot. Right when I herd the gun shot I ran as fast as I could back home. When I got home I saw my mom and my dad laying on the ground dead. My brother was the only one to survive and me of course. I herd another gun shot at that moment me and my brother ran to turkey island. That's were most of the turkey's live. You can only go there if your in danger or if you are a kid and you've lost your parents. e and my brother got there and nobody was there. We both said at the same time where is everyone at? I herd a gun shot and that gun shot hit my brother. Then there was only me. The shooter shot another bullet almost hitting me but didn't. And that is how i almost died. THE END!!!
ReplyDeleteTurkey Island sounds like a good place to go shopping for a Thanksgiving turkey.
DeleteIf I was a turkey and I had a gun pointed at me than I would be scared and run for my life and if i got away than I would hide until he/she went away and than I would come out and if they were hiding and they shot than would run for my life if I am alive.
ReplyDeleteI was running for my life he's coming! The hunter is coming it's at that time again.Its thanksgiving but it not giving us anything but death.This is the end of some turkey.So get off you fetheand fight for are life.Iam sick of my frinds dieing.The next day they were geting ready for turkey war.Then they got out there and the pepole were ready.The turkey war stared and 30 minetes thay made thay sad some tukey can be killed
ReplyDeletethe end
My name is Bella i'm a turkey. It is the day before thanksgiving and ever turkey is nervous and scared. We all hear to thing A gunshot and my best friend Ally. She was dead. I thought i was going to be next,but i was wrong. It was thanksgiving day and all the turkey celebrated expect me i was still devastated by losing my best friend.
ReplyDeleteTHE END
BY:ALEXANDRA MAE JOYCE
good job lexi thats a good story
DeleteHi they call me Bob.I've here lately I've been feeling watced.A couple
ReplyDeleteof days ago I heared a noise like this pow. He was trying to shoot me.
But luckily he missed it scared the devil out.I flew away quick.Thats my
story of surviving Thanksgivinig.
I woke up by the sound of leaves crunching. Then I remembered, it's Thanksgiving. I ran away as fast as I could, but it was no use. The sound of the crunching leaves just got louder and louder, closer and closer. Then there was the sound of a bullet leaving a shotgun. It just missed my head, and landed with a crack on an old tree. I kept on running then finally, a third, fourth, fifth bullet left the gun. They all missed. Then the sixth bullet came. It hit my head. I fell to the ground with a thud. Blood poured over my eyes. I couldn't see. Someone picked me up by the legs, and carried me to a tarp, and wrapped me in it. Next thing I knew, I was sitting on a table with a group of people surrounding me. I was headless. I was Thanksgiving dinner.
ReplyDeleteThat is a really good story I like how you used detail.
DeleteThanks Heather!
DeleteTHAT'S CREEPY :-)
DeleteM-O-R-B-I-D. Oh my. You poor turkey.
DeleteHallie, your story is amazing! I love how you gave good details like how you said the blood covered the turkey's eyes and the crunch of the leaves. This story is very creative! (:
DeleteHahaha! One down 99 more to go......
Delete- The Hunter
It was a cold Thanksgiving morning. I had been out looking for food. While I was walking in the field I heard something in the bushes. I looked over to the bushes and didn't see anything,so I kept strolling along. A few minutes later I heard another sound in the bushes. I looked again and didn't see anything,so again I kept on walking. I heard the noise a few more times so i just decided to check out what was going on. I walked about 20 feet then stopped in my tracks! What I saw was a turkeys worst nightmare on Thanksgiving. A GUN! I was running as fast as I could! I heard gunshots and felt stuff FLYING past me! I eventually found my way deep in the woods where i was safe! Or as I thought so. I heard another gunshot then,BAM! I got shot in the arm! I eventually escaped the hunter and learned a lesson to not go out on Thanksgiving!
ReplyDeleteyours is a good turkey story
DeleteI am Tucker. I am a turkey. It is Thanksgiving and the hunters are hunting turkeys. I am trying to hide but everywhere i go they find me. Maybe if i hide in the tree they wont find me. I see the hunters and they cant find me. They walked past me so I'm going to get down. I getting down and then i here a "BANG." I run as fast as I can. I finally got away. I am not eaten for Thanksgiving. Bye bye for now. Gobble Gobble.
ReplyDeleteGOBBLE,GOBBLE,GOBBLE, Hey i'm blow pop the turkey. It's Thanksgiving you know were you give thanks and eat turkey. Yea well i'm the turkey being eaten. Well I was walking in the woods and I heard this turkey call but it didn't sound like a real turkey,so I thought to my self and then I realized that it was thanksgiving and then I heard BAM, BAM, BAM. So I started running I got so far away that I couldn't hear the shots anymore. BAM! Then I noticed darkness I was shot to death AHHHHHHHH!
ReplyDeleteI woke up and said cokledoodledoo . Then , there was a human behind me just in time I ran. I was still running from them and I wondered when will this end. It never did. Until,they gave up. While I was walking back another human came and I ran and ran. ran then he thought he got me and he took me to is house. And right before I got cooked Iran but this time he shot me I was dead.
ReplyDeleteHeather turkeys don't say cokledoodledoo thats a rooster lol!!!!!!!
DeleteHi my name is Jeff,it is Thanksgiving morning and i know there is someone who wants me for dinner. Well its about 6:00 in the morning and and i am watching everything because i really don't want to be in some dudes fat belly. Or get stuck in someones teeth. So im going to try not to be seen. People need to go on a diet anyways.
ReplyDeleteNice story
DeleteHello im Blobble, the turkey...its getting close to Thanksgiving and thats not good for a turkey!Uh oh I think I hear him,yep its him the hunter that has always tried to get me but never could haha im so sly (day dreams) but anyway ive seen him like a million times and his family too...Oh no he found me RUN!!!
ReplyDelete(And Blobble was never to be seen...AGAIN!!DON DON DON!!)
yours is funny
Deletegobble gobble AHHHHHHHH BOOM BOOM DONT SHOOT ME AHHHHH hi i am a turkey BOOM i am 2 1 and 30 pounds i am being hunted for thanks giving i am thankful that i am not dead... yet we turkeys are not that smart but i escaped the turkey farm it was get fat and be eaten or escape and be hunted so i escaped and i met a pig he was being hunted to so i helped him so him and i could live another day the next day we found the hunter he was asleep so we ran we found a owl he was smart elder he said a good defense is a good offence so we busted the turkeys and pigs out of the farm and attacked the hunters village and lost most of the troops got cooked but we escaped thought the woods then we waited for next year the end gobble gobble
ReplyDeleteGood Job! I like Your story.
DeleteGreat Job! Love your Story.
DeleteGood story, but it was one, long sentence. Chop it into sentences next time, Calvin.
DeleteGOBBLE,GOBBLE,GOBBLE, Hey i'm blow pop the turkey. It's Thanksgiving you know were you give thanks and eat turkey. Yea well i'm the turkey being eaten. Well I was walking in the woods and I heard this turkey call but it didn't sound like a real turkey,so I thought to my self and then I realized that it was thanksgiving and then I heard BAM, BAM, BAM. So I started running I got so far away that I couldn't hear the shots anymore. BAM! Then I noticed darkness I was shot to death AHHHHHHHH!
ReplyDeleteThe morning of November 25 I woke up to a loud sound, "BOOM!'' I knew what sound it was, it happens every November, a gunshot from a hunter out for us turkeys. I went to go to where it was coming from. I looked for a gun or a person, but no sign of either of them. Then I looked up and I saw him, a rather small man, with a very big gun. He saw me, and shot. "BOOM!" He hit a tree. He couldn't shoot where he aimed. I don't know if it was him or his gun. He shot again he hit a rock, then it hit me after it hit the rock. But, luckily it was one of my large talons. He yelled,"Come on out boys I think we got him!" His voice sounded familiar. Why, it was Evan! and out came William, Seth, and Hillary Clinton. I don't know why I didn't see them? Then I was still on the ground acting like I was hurt. Then they walked over and picked me up, well at least tried to pick me up. Then I pecked all of them. Then they left . Then the hunters never came back again.
ReplyDeleteThat's too good! XD!!!
DeleteI am not sure William and Seth would be with Hillary... ;)
DeleteIt is November 26 and I learned in T.S.[Turkey School] that my kind is hunted today for our meat to stuff that weird dude who just shows up at your house and says happy Thanksgiving to everybody and eats all the food.Anyway,I don't think that stuff is true.So I just waddled through the woods and I smelt something real bad so I followed it and I saw it bundled together and I just realized it a human! And its gun barrel was pointing right at me! Before I realized that I was still focused on that horrible smell! Then I realized it was coming from the little one.Then I saw the barrel and bolted mostly because of the smell. I told my guys what happened and they just gobbled at me! I was kinda mad,but I was mostly glad that I survived the gun...and the smell!
ReplyDeleteHey, I am a turkey I saw a hunter.I ran and ran but the hunter heard me move then he ran after me. I made many turns and jumped over creaks he hadn't shoot me ,but I stopped because he got stuck at a creak.I thought he would be stuck a while.Instead he got right up.I was close to my home then he started shooting I ran everywhere then I was safe home
ReplyDeleteThats pretty cool Paul.
DeleteCOOL! JOHN
ReplyDeleteToday was the day before Thanksgiving. All of the hunters are killing all of my freinds to eat tommorrow! I'm really scared that they're going to kill me! Wait just a second! Hmmmm.......where can I hide? AH HA! There's a barn right across a lake! The farmer there loves turkeys! He is missing one. I could probably go over there and pretend that I'm the missing turkey..........wait! Did I just hear that the farmer said that he was letting them loose?! Oh boy! Now, I'm really scared! Where else could I hide?! I know! I know! I can go to the farmer pet store! They have alot of turkeys for the farmers to keep as pets! I'll go there! *1 hour later* Yay! I'm finally here! I see someone not dressed like a hunter or a crazy person tht hurts them! I'm so happy! ''Hello Mr.Turkey! It seems like you don't want to killed today! Don't worry! Kylie and Emma Grace are the owners. They'll take care of you!'' said a worker. Now it's Thanksgiving, and I'm not killed! This has been the best Thanksgiving ever! Now, I'll get to sleep all Thanksgiving today, and play with my new human friends! This is how I survied Thanksgiving! Gobble! Gobble!
ReplyDeleteHi, I am a turkey. Have you ever wondered what it was like to be a turkey? It's pretty fun, except for Thanksgiving, That's were things get complicated. I'll try to tell you before they find me.
ReplyDeleteSo here I am just minding my own business and I hear it... BOOM! There it is, the first shot. These hunters go after me every year around this time. At first I didn't know what it was, but then I realized. I looked for them, got up, and ran like the dickens. They chased me through the creek, over the hill and even through the old bear's den. I think they realized where they were when they woke the bear up by shooting his toe. They ran. you can bet your sorry little doggy I was not about to stick around with that nine-toed bear so I got out of there faster than a cheetah with its tail on fire. Then I saw what I had to do...
So here I am, sitting in a log waiting to see which will get me first, the hunters, or the bear. Wait! I hear something! AAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
I love your story, Julia! Very creative and good!
DeleteI like how you had separate paragraphs. I especially loved your ending.
DeleteSo one day is terible every year Thanksgiving I hate it.My whole family has been roasted.My dad was just waking he heard a sound then it started to smell bad.Then pow he dead .Ever since the I have been mad at these fat ugly creatures .I have learned my lesson.Thats all I got to say under the ground
ReplyDeleteHA HA HA HA!
DeleteHi,I am a turkey. You probably think we're stupid but delicious to eat. But were smarter than you at least that is what I think. The whole reason we RUN is because you HUNT US DOWN FOR THANKSGIVING. Thanks I feel LOVED (No I don't I was kidding). So who is stupid now YOU YOU YOU! Some people say I am annoying that is why I am still alive. I charge at them and BOOM the WHOLE EARTH SHAKES. Then they run away like little BABIES HA HA HA HA HA that just proves my point so don't try to kill me for THANKSGIVING because you'll regret it turkeys know best! HA HA HA have a happy THANKSGIVING!
ReplyDeleteI want to know more of this turkey's story. Sounds like a sassy turkey to me! :)
DeleteIt is I, George Gobble. Let me tell you a fascinating thing that happened just not to long ago. It stars like this, I came into a close call with the greatest hunter in the land, Michael Wiffle. It was a chilly evening, the week right before Thanksgiving. Me and my girlfriend, Jenny, were on a romantic date right under the Great Oak Tree. We call it that in these here woods. Well, me and here were enjoying our time together wen some fat man burst out the woods and makes a branch right in half! " Hey, you old man! Can we get some privacy?" I yell. " You silly goose, he doesn't speak Turkey!" my girlfriend yells. " Oh yeah... I forgot, thanks for reminding me sweet cheeks!" I say. As the hunter steps closer, me and girlfriend, Jenny, step back. Oh yeah, did I tell you I had a girlfriend? Well, I do! He name is Jenny! Back to the story, as we stepped back the hunter yells, " Come here turkey, turkey. Cluck Cluck!". " Is he stupid or what?" I turn around and tell Jenny. Right then and there that fat man grabs me and swooosh, puts me in a net. Jenny runs away while I scream for my mommy. As me and the old man head out the woods, I realize that my own girlfriend ditched me. " Girls!" I say, " They all are so mean, ditching you when you need help the most!" All the man can hear is, "Gobble, gobble, gobble!". The man yells," Shush up turkey!". I was about to say that he better watch his mouth when, SHAZAM! A whole squad of turkeys attack the fat man. I see Jenny, mommy, daddy, Earl, Billy Gob, Marsha ( my ex... Just in case she tells you that I broke up with her, I really broke up with her. She is a liar.) Mandy and Mark, and a whole bunch of other people that I can't remember! They made the fat man fall down and pass out then Marsha took her claw and let me out. I walk out and Marsha gives me the stare. I keep walking and go hug mommy. She tells me I should be hugging Jenny because she is the one that saved me, but I just tell her nah. We all go back into the woods and talk and stuff. We all were happy and thankful that we are not food for Thanksgiving. Well, that is the end of my story! Good bye folks, and remember to always be thankful!
ReplyDeleteYou have a lot of characters. Are they people you know? I like your theme: remember to be thankful.
DeleteI woke up sweating in my haystack,which is my bed, knowing it was thanksgiving. I don't like thanksgiving though. Mostly because there are many funerals on Thanksgiving. People love shooting turkeys on Thanksgiving, I don't know why,but they do. Sadly. Anyways, let me introduce myself,my name is Edward, Edward Gobble ,that is. Never say Gobble Gobble , it is a disgrace to turkeys,and I am a turkey. So... NO ,DON NOT EVER SAY IT. okay? '' Edward,Edward, come in here fast!'' said my sister Bella. '' Okay, I will be there in just a second'' , I said. I soon went to the living room and there on the floor, was my dead mother. '' NO, NO,NO, WHAT HAPPENED TO MOM?'', I said . Dad soon walked into the living room and said,'' Your mother got shot by a hunter this morning. She went to go get us some berries , and a hunter soon shot her. '' ''How did you get her body back?'', I wondered. '' The hunter accidentally fired his gun,he Actually didn't know he shot a turkey,'' said dad. Being a turkey is a rough life , I thought. I soon wondered outside,and all of the sudden, a gun fired. It went right through my skull,and before I knew it, I was dead, but right before I died I said,'' Being a turkey,is rough.'' THE END
ReplyDeletethat is a really fun storie
ReplyDeletekyle
ReplyDeleteHello everybody I am Tommy the Thanksgiving turkey.Me and my friends were almost killed this morning.Let me tell you the story. Me and my friends William, Myles, and Seth were out early this morning and we were just looking for some food like a couple of pieces of corn just laying somewhere.Then all of a sudden, BOOM!!, Seth was shot and bleeding very badly.Me, Myles, and William started singing shot through the heart and your to blame you give love a bad name! Then all of of a sudden, I saw something that was very tall and skinny that was dressed in camo why I saw who it was it was,CHAD THOMPSON! We were so scared we stopped singing,grabbed Seth, and took of running. So that is the story of how we almost died except Seth, he is out dead! HAHA! The End
ReplyDeleteI'm walk through the forest on thanks giving and I'm telling my self.... just keep walking just keep walking just keep walking walking walking.But then,"SNAP," it was.....my friend Bagel me and Bagel have been friends for a while he calls me Bob.Bagel and I are walking through the forest talking about a new hunter hunting dun,dun,dun turkeys!Then ck Bagel "RUN"bang,bang,bang me and bagel wing flapping and every thing me and Bagel are saying "GOBBLE GOBBLE,AHHHHHHHH!"bang bang me and Bagel are shot and are never seen again!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteOne thing I can do to be kind is helping some one pick up their books. Another thing is to pick up my trash at lunch. Also, I can clean the class room in the afternoon. I can also be quiet while the teachers are talking.
ReplyDeleteAiden, I love the sound effects!! They add lots to your story!! Keep up the good work buddy!! I mean Bob! ;)
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